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dextrouse
02-02-2010, 03:46 PM
this (http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/1056/dextrouse.png)

Rate or comment anyone?
ReMixeD
02-02-2010, 04:27 PM
6/10 Not bad for a begginer. ^-^
Reefat
02-02-2010, 08:56 PM
It needs some flow and better text. 5/10
kakashi
02-02-2010, 09:57 PM
It needs to be taken off the internet ._.
But for real, change the brightness, text, flow.
jwutheheadcase
02-03-2010, 12:38 AM
Much better than anything I could do. However, the moltres looks like you took it off of a nintendo 64 pokemon game, perhaps up the quality? 7/10
Jassie
02-03-2010, 09:16 AM
To help with flow change the displacement of the sparks brushing.One or two of them should be set to -20 and I cant remember which but if you change it to 20(not the - is gone) then it should be facing the upper right corner.That would help greatly with the flow :]

Right below his head is a part of your background that looks over contrasted.Try to fix that if you can.

Also remove text for now.It would be WAY better without it :p

And finally erase the effects over its face.
dextrouse
02-03-2010, 04:26 PM
To help with flow change the displacement of the sparks brushing.One or two of them should be set to -20 and I cant remember which but if you change it to 20(not the - is gone) then it should be facing the upper right corner.That would help greatly with the flow :]

Right below his head is a part of your background that looks over contrasted.Try to fix that if you can.

Also remove text for now.It would be WAY better without it :p

And finally erase the effects over its face.

yup.i'll try to do that

next time i will do a combination of two tutorials