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Doppelgänger
01-03-2010, 02:08 PM
Okay, so I thought of an idea. The main character is a 14 year-old kid named Lucky Knowles. He was out joyriding with some of his friends(Driver was only 16) when they were hit by a tractor-trailer and he was killed. He was summoned to The Gates of Heaven... then I cut off. Any help?

war of time
01-03-2010, 03:07 PM
Awesome story! Loved the intense car chase. And the part where he got summoned to heaven, that was soooo touching.

Good ending? :P

Just kidding. How about the people there tell him who killed him etc and he wants revenge on the driver of the trailer, but in the end he realizes it was his own fault and is friends and...yea.