[RaySoul]

Thanks a million for this,the part about details and the 3 Ws helped me a lot. I come up with decent content for the stories,I've always been told that,but the describtions,the detailing,it was always a bit hard.

I ended up using the same expressions or decriptive advjectives over and over. In other words,my English isn't very rich,in terms of quality,mainly because I'm Portuguese. English is a second language for me