Poems.....anyone?

[Rhythm]

First of all to introduce myself, Rhythm is my name;
Yeah! you are right I am new to this game.

I have seen some people, more people I want to see;
Who can get into rhyming spree here with me.

So let your creativity flow off your mind;
Think out of the box and blow off the bind.

Write something that will make everyone frown;
May it be anything, even tragedy of a clown.
For this should be the birth place for future poets indeed;
A person should feel happy with the rhymes, as he scrolls down.

[lionclaw753]

First of all to introduce myself, Rhythm is my name;
Yeah! you are right I am new to this game.

I have seen some people, more people I want to see;
Who can get into rhyming spree here with me.

So let your creativity flow off your mind;
Think out of the box and blow off the bind.

Write something that will make everyone frown;
May it be anything, even tragedy of a clown.
For this should be the birth place for future poets indeed;
A person should feel happy with the rhymes, as he scrolls down.

that last two lines are kinda bumpy..

[GoldenHeracross(?)]

that last two lines are kinda bumpy..

you know there are different forms of poetry.. I prefer couplet lmao, short and cool.

[Teamaqua]

as i was walking down the street
a guy asked me to rub his feet

when i reached down he passed gas
then i said ill pass
My grandmom was hurt so i wish her well
and ill be laughing my @ss off wen my teacher is burning in hell!

[Rhythm]

Let's have some humor, for humor is for good;
I think I have to get those things too, yeah I should.

[Teamaqua]

yea i know its fizzy
it really is
just like nizzy
i have to say no giz

[Zommano]

Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue,
You are so sweet,
I love you,

Yeah. I win. lmao 8D

[oz11]

S is for the simple need
E is for the ecstasy
X is to mark the spot
Thats the part you really want

[war of time]

Chromosome, nice new name
Two can play at this game
I got the rhythm and the rhyme
You're too old and I'm in my prime.

[Rhythm]

war of time, seems like the secret's revealed;
Still I've got, lot of enthusiasms to be killed.
I believe that Deimos is the who opened the pot;
I just had to implement a new idea that Chromosome had, I had to hit the iron as it was hot.
With multiple accounts, I had no hard feelings for any divine creation;
I just never wanted to use Chromosome as the one who would rhyme, for Chromosome is reserved for humiliation.

You had a better attempt with your rhythm and rhyme;
If only you could explain me the last line of your last couplet, what does that mean war of time?

[Jordy123]

war of time, seems like the secret's revealed;
Still I've got, lot of enthusiasms to be killed.
I believe that Deimos is the who opened the pot;
I just had to implement a new idea that Chromosome had, I had to hit the iron as it was hot.
With multiple accounts, I had no hard feelings for any divine creation;
I just never wanted to use Chromosome as the one who would rhyme, for Chromosome is reserved for humiliation.

You had a better attempt with your rhythm and rhyme;
If only you could explain me the last line of your last couplet, what does that mean war of time?
what does that mean?

[Teamaqua]

May i say i like to get down
in a bar not to far
its just around town
Then i start to roll
as a perrson gets on the pole O_o

[electabuzzz]

read my signature thats a real poem!

[Teamaqua]

Hmmm i dont like it no offence

[BattleDance]

First of all to introduce myself, Rhythm is my name;
Yeah! you are right I am new to this game.

I have seen some people, more people I want to see;
Who can get into rhyming spree here with me.

So let your creativity flow off your mind;
Think out of the box and blow off the bind.

Write something that will make everyone frown;
May it be anything, even tragedy of a clown.
For this should be the birth place for future poets indeed;
A person should feel happy with the rhymes, as he scrolls down.

Ok, Rhythm. I see your rhymes. I know your intentions are true.
And I love challenges like these. Apparently so do you.

Always training. Levels? Almost never gaining. He didn't look like he had a chance.
But was given hope in a spark of generosity. My name is BattleDance.

New to this game as well,
but when I saw this, I was like "What the Hell?"
Someone here who can rhyme?
I'm loving this thread already. Here's what I do in my spare time.
I put rhymes on the page.
Fresh from my mind - the cage.
I use the line above a lot
to explain the abstract concept of thought.
You must rhyme in your spare time too.
I enjoyed watching your words as they flew.
So now I ask you, Rhythm.
Show us the rhymes that'll really get them.
Sorry if this post was late.
But I just now saw them on this date: 2010 - February 8.

Hope you enjoyed
What my mind just deployed.

[Chromosome]

That's not quite a poem, rap it seems to me;
For I thought I had a true challenge *Points at thee*.
Let me place something, which can really be termed as a poem;
Some similes, metaphors, and other figures of speech, which would not sound lame.

Empty skies, vacant minds, nothing I see in this world;
Weird thoughts, sarcasm, irony, in my hair it is curled.
I can't think of anything else, why hollow am I so?
I don't know how to get out of this stage, which miracle seeds to sow.
Again and again, I try to be determined, to defeat emptiness for once;
Harder I try, harder it gets, A guy behaving like nuns.

[BattleDance]

That's not quite a poem, rap it seems to me;
For I thought I had a true challenge *Points at thee*.
Let me place something, which can really be termed as a poem;
Some similes, metaphors, and other figures of speech, which would not sound lame.

Empty skies, vacant minds, nothing I see in this world;
Weird thoughts, sarcasm, irony, in my hair it is curled.
I can't think of anything else, why hollow am I so?
I don't know how to get out of this stage, which miracle seeds to sow.
Again and again, I try to be determined, to defeat emptiness for once;
Harder I try, harder it gets, I throw a stone but get shot with guns.

"That's not quite a poem, rap it seems to me;"?
All rap is is Retards Attempting Poetry.

Rap has no meaning. No style. No flair.
Rap might as well not even be there. D:

[Chromosome]

Why don't you try something, that wouldn't be just a talk;
Write something special or weird, which can give everyone a shock.

[lionclaw753]

It starts with
One thing I don't know why
It doesn't even matter how hard you try
Keep that in mind I designed this rhyme
To explain in due time

All I know
Time is a valuable thing
Watch it fly by as the pendulum swings
Watch it count down to the end of the day
The clock ticks life away

It's so unreal
Didn't look out below
Watch the time go right out the window
Trying to hold on, but didn't even know
Or wasted it all just to watch you go

I kept everything inside
And even though I tried, it all fell apart
What it meant to me will eventually be
A memory of a time when

I tried so hard and got so far
But in the end it doesn't even matter
I had to fall to lose it all
But in the end it doesn't even matter

One thing, I don't know why
It doesn't even matter how hard you try
Keep that in mind I designed this rhyme
To remind myself how

I tried so hard
In spite of the way you were mocking me
Acting like I was part of your property
Remembering all the times you fought with me
I'm surprised

It got so far
Things aren't the way they were before
You wouldn't even recognize me anymore
Not that you knew me back then
But it all comes back to me in the end

You kept everything inside
And even though I tried, it all fell apart
What it meant to me will eventually be
A memory of a time when

I tried so hard and got so far
But in the end it doesn't even matter
I had to fall to lose it all
But in the end it doesn't even matter

I've put my trust in you
Pushed as far as I can go
And for all this
There's only one thing you should know

I've put my trust in you
Pushed as far as I can go
And for all this
There's only one thing you should know

I tried so hard and got so far
But in the end it doesn't even matter
I had to fall to lose it all
But in the end it doesn't even matter

[Chromosome]

@lionclaw753....you forgot to give credit to LinkinPark for their song "In the end".

[Teamaqua]

O_O

Lionclaw isnt a dork
maybe pork
cause i eat him wit a fork

yumyumyum

[BattleDance]

Why don't you try something, that wouldn't be just a talk;
Write something special or weird, which can give everyone a shock.

What's so special about me?
I'm only human like you.
What could really be shocking or special
about us two?

[Ichigo Uzumaki]

Now I've been writing songs for quite a few years
Some will make you laugh, some will brinf you tears
But poem writing is not something I do very much
But I hope you'll enjoy my new poem writing touch

[Chromosome]

Ichigo, Go ahead, show me what you have in store;
Write something good enough, of which I would want more.

[Ichigo Uzumaki]

When I have enough time. Gotta get review stuff done first.